Can I get an honest opinion?

Posted on August 05, 2012 at 07:43 AM (UTC) ( 10 months ago);
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wrote the following:

Empty Hollow Shattered Broken Knees buckled under the weight Of words unspoken Please Let them flow Like the unshed tears Glowing like the sun After so many years Of suppressed emotion Reluctant devotion I can finally see I will be free

 

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  1. RE: Can I get an honest opinion?

    Posted on August 05, 2012 at 07:46 PM (UTC) ( 10 months ago )
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    wrote the following:

    nice love it

  2. RE: Can I get an honest opinion?

    Posted on August 05, 2012 at 10:09 PM (UTC) ( 10 months ago )
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    wrote the following:

    boring and generic

    • RE: Can I get an honest opinion?

      Posted on August 05, 2012 at 11:39 PM (UTC) ( 10 months ago )
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      wrote the following:

      wow now aren't you just the editorial critic. i find your post "boring and generic".