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  1. RE: I Fucked My Step-dad...

    ( about 5 years ago )
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    673f31114b0a0283d0fa3a9a5a2c021e

    wrote the following:

    It's about as well written as your standard letter to Hussler.  Not saying that's necessarily a bad thing. My question is, is it the step-dad's fantasy, or the girl's?  Or completely made up by someone who is neither a step-dad nor a teenage girl?  Just curious.

    • RE: I Fucked My Step-dad...

      ( about 5 years ago )
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      D14be247030df8d19b7f60830e937f6f

      wrote the following:

      Well, I've read worse. I won't say that it has some great underlying meaning to it or anything, as it is clearly meant to be risque and sexual, but the composition is very good. Doesn't lag, it is sexually explicit but not so focused on details that it is a chore to read, and the author's style is easily digested.

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  1. RE: I Fucked My Step-dad...

    ( about 5 years ago )
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    D14be247030df8d19b7f60830e937f6f

    wrote the following:

    Well, I've read worse. I won't say that it has some great underlying meaning to it or anything, as it is clearly meant to be risque and sexual, but the composition is very good. Doesn't lag, it is sexually explicit but not so focused on details that it is a chore to read, and the author's style is easily digested.